"I want more out of life than this; I want more." London Community Gospel Choir
I had to think thorough through my past memories. I started with events in my life that took a big chunk of my time. Blog post #3 shows this by how I deal in my depression. However, I feel like that seemed shallow and almost selfish just to write about myself so much, so I wrote a more interactive story. I'm talking about blog post #4. Where the littlest thing, such as being late for work, makes me anxious. This still however, focused on my inner conflicts, and I wanted my stories to be even more interactive and engaging. Thus, I thought up with blog post #5. This post shows a more dynamic scene. It has a physical conflict as well as a internal one, so I felt like this was the best one to date. Here, you will find my multiple drafts of blog post #5, in a more detailed and lengthier version. I updated blog post #5 and revised it into blog post #6. I added a beginning introductory paragraph. I added more sentence variation to create more flow.
These are my current drafts for the Narrative Project.